Thursday, February 28, 2013

On the Pier

This is yet another painting that I have mixed feelings about.  Overall, I dislike it, partly because it did not live up to my hopes and expectations, and partly because it has serious flaws.  On the other hand, I can pick out some things I really like about it.  I love the play of light on the clothing of the man and the boy, and the subjects' natural poses and postures.  I love the "triangle" composition with the three figures.  I like the sense of immediacy, of catching a "moment."  I like the soft colors.  But I don't like the water, which looks like blue paint was applied slapdash, and I don't like the unfinished, sketchy fence boards.  The reason those parts seem incomplete is that they are incomplete.  This painting took a lot longer than I had planned, because I struggled with the figures, and I just ran out of time to do justice to the ocean and fence.  Since I was doing a daily painting regime, I went on the next day to other paintings and didn't spend the time to work this one further.  Even though this painting didn't live up to my hopes, I like to think that someone who enjoys fishing would appreciate the "bonding" moment it depicts.  (No. 58, 6x6", on Gessobord, Oct. 22, 2012)

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